Giải đề"Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Theo hướng Partly (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa ủng hộ ý kia) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai: 
  • Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, ý kia cũng có lý
    • Body 1: On the other hand, viết về ý số 1”this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies”
      • Main idea 1: Developing business and commercial spaces can boost the local economy, create job opportunities, and generate revenue through taxes. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • Supporting idea: This economic growth may lead to improved infrastructure and public services.
        • Example: The revitalization of Pike Place Market in Seattle exemplifies how developing business and commercial spaces can significantly benefit a local economy by transforming a traditional fish market into a vibrant tourist destination, attracting millions of visitors and injecting substantial revenue into the city.
      • Main idea 2: Utilizing parkland for more practical purposes could make better use of valuable urban real estate. 
        • Supporting idea: Urban spaces should prioritize functionality and meeting the needs of the population.
        • Example: The High Line Park in New York City showcases how repurposing parkland optimizes urban real estate by creatively transforming an abandoned elevated freight rail line into a valuable green recreational space, meeting public needs and revitalizing the cityscape.
    • Body 2: On the one hand, viết về ý số 2”không đồng ý dùng public parks cho mục đích khác”
      • Main idea 1: Public parks contribute to the quality of life in urban areas by providing green spaces for recreation, relaxation, and socialization. 
        • Supporting idea: These spaces offer a respite from the concrete jungle and contribute to mental and physical well-being.
        • Example: Sprawling across 24.5 acres, Millennium Park offers diverse green spaces: rolling landscapes, serene gardens, and playful fountains. These areas provide opportunities for various activities like picnics, walks, cycling, and enjoying nature.
      • Main idea 2: Converting green spaces into residential or commercial areas can have environmental consequences, such as the loss of biodiversity, increased air pollution, and heat island effects. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
        • Supporting idea: Parks play a role in maintaining ecological balance and mitigating some of the negative impacts of urbanization.
        • Example: The Taksim Square controversy in Istanbul vividly illustrates the consequences of converting green spaces into development projects. Once a tree-lined plaza, Taksim Square has seen a loss of green space and biodiversity as successive development plans replaced trees and gardens with concrete structures.

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