Phân tích "Even though developing countries receive financial help, poverty is still an issue. Some say they should be receiving other kind of help, to eliminate poverty. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give examples and suggest what other form of help can be offered." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Even though developing countries receive financial help, poverty is still an issue. Some say they should be receiving other kind of help, to eliminate poverty. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give examples and suggest what other form of help can be offered." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Even though developing countries receive financial help, poverty is still an issue. Some say they should be receiving other kind of help, to eliminate poverty. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give examples and suggest what other form of help can be offered.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Main idea 1:  even if financially supported, third world countries still need experts in the fields of science, law and medicine in order to encourage their development (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: practical assistance and advice are indispensable for further advancement)
    • Supporting idea: scientists, lawyers and doctors can only be trained, and professional and systematic education and training programs are therefore more practical and suitable in the context of developing nations.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "suggest" tiếng anh
    • Example: 
      • In Ghana, the government has partnered with the private sector to establish a number of technical and vocational training institutes.** These institutes offer training in a variety of skills, such as carpentry, plumbing, and welding.
      • In Kenya, the government has launched a program to train teachers in rural areas.** This program offers scholarships and financial assistance to students who agree to teach in rural areas after they graduate.
      • In Pakistan, the government has established a number of universities that offer specialized training in fields such as engineering, medicine, and law.** These universities have helped to increase the number of skilled professionals in Pakistan.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Main idea 2: hands-on support is long-term solutions to sustainable development 
    • Supporting idea: technology transferring and labour force training have long-lasting effects on developing countries’ economy, shortening the gap between the first-world countries and the second-world ones.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  , Which rút gọn thành , Ving trong mệnh đề quan hệ
    • Example: South Korea is a good example of how technology transferring and labor force training can have long-lasting effects on a developing country's economy. In the early 1960s, South Korea was a poor country with a low GDP per capita. However, the government began to invest heavily in education and technology, and it also encouraged foreign companies to invest in the country. As a result, South Korea's economy began to grow rapidly, and by the 1990s, it had become a developed country.

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