Phân tích"Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?​"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 2.12.2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 1.12.2022)

Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng negative):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative (Viết về work)
    • Main idea: The delegation of various mechanical tasks to robots is likely to give rise to greater unemployment figures. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "figure" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: In the workplace, especially in manufacturing, millions of workers worldwide, particularly unskilled ones, would lose their jobs to cutting-edge robotic systems. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Currently, large numbers of manual workers are being replaced by cutting-edge robotics systems in numerous factories around the world)
    • Example: 
      • For example, fully automated processes have already taken over monotonous jobs such as assembly-line workers or bank tellers in many developed countries such as the United States.
      • For instance, thousands of Chinese assembly workers at FoxConn, a major manufacturer of Apple products, have recently been made redundant after the company adopted a fully automated process that minimizes the need for a skilled and unskilled human labor supply. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "HUMAN" & "HUMANS" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao negative (Viết về home)
    • Main idea:  the growth of a robotics industry exacerbates a modern trend towards isolation. 
    • Supporting idea: 
    • Example: 

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