Phân tích "Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề 14/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: This results in higher living standards, and thus we need to keep finding new sources since we will eventually run out. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng trạng từ "eventually" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: fuels such as oil and gas enable the heating of homes, the running of cars and planes, and the production of goods.
      • Example: The 2013 study in Energy Policy revealed a clear correlation: fossil fuel consumption positively impacts economic development, crucial for heating homes, powering transportation, manufacturing, and electricity generation. However, acknowledging their eventual depletion necessitates ongoing exploration of renewable energy sources to ensure long-term energy security and progress.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: new sources of fossil fuels will alleviate the power scarcity and an economic boom will be fuelled accordingly. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The most tangible advantage of such explorations is the economic growth: to the people, to the nation and to the world)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It will leave millions of people out of poverty and enlarge the middle-class base.
        • Such activities are projected to create more job opportunities to people by strengthening the sectors like health, education, transport and communication.
        • When each country develops, the global market would see a boom and the global standards of living would rise. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "standard" tiếng anh
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm ideas khác:
      • Main idea: The increasing likeliness of newer innovations is beneficial for the human race. 
      • Supporting idea: People are really longing for inventions which solve their problems and can increase their comfort, and this is possible only when such explorations are left unhindered.
      • Example: For decades, people longed for a solution to treat life-threatening diseases like diabetes. Unrestricted scientific exploration led to the development of insulin injections, a breakthrough that has improved and extended the lives of millions.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: This results in higher living standards, and thus we need to keep finding new sources since we will eventually run out.
        • Supporting idea: fuels such as oil and gas enable the heating of homes, the running of cars and planes, and the production of goods.
        • Example: The 2013 study in Energy Policy revealed a clear correlation: fossil fuel consumption positively impacts economic development, crucial for heating homes, powering transportation, manufacturing, and electricity generation. However, acknowledging their eventual depletion necessitates ongoing exploration of renewable energy sources to ensure long-term energy security and progress.
      • Main idea 2: new sources of fossil fuels will alleviate the power scarcity and an economic boom will be fuelled accordingly. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The most tangible advantage of such explorations is the economic growth: to the people, to the nation and to the world)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • It will leave millions of people out of poverty and enlarge the middle-class base.
          • Such activities are projected to create more job opportunities to people by strengthening the sectors like health, education, transport and communication.
          • When each country develops, the global market would see a boom and the global standards of living would rise. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form "boom" tiếng anh
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: We will end up potentially jeopardising what are beautiful landscapes.
        • Supporting idea: Continued reliance on fossil fuels often leads to environmentally destructive practices such as mining, drilling, and fracking, which can scar and degrade natural areas.
        • Example: For instance, an area which countries would like to drill is the Antarctic, home to many glaciers and animals such as polar bears and penguins. Drilling here would harm the habitat, and in particular, any spillages would be disastrous to the environment.
      • Main idea 2: Many wildlife habitats, crucial for migration and breeding, become fragmented and get destroyed. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "habitat" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: Some of adverse effects include the irreversible degradation of vast areas of land, destruction of natural habitat and pollution.
        • Example: The Florida panther, an endangered species, faces habitat loss due to human development, disrupting its migration, destroying essential resources, and increasing road mortality. This illustrates how habitat loss jeopardizes not only individual species but also vital ecological processes, posing a threat to biodiversity and ecosystem stability.
           

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