Phân tích "Costs of international travel are decreasing and the tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of an increasing tourism activity in different countries?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Costs of international travel are decreasing and the tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of an increasing tourism activity in different countries?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Costs of international travel are decreasing and the tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of an increasing tourism activity in different countries?

Dạng advantages & disadvantages thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.

• Dạng advantages & disadvantages có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Tourism can bring in a lot of money to a country, which can help to boost the economy. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & Word form của "boost"
        • Supporting idea: This is because tourists spend money on things like hotels, food, transportation, and souvenirs.
        • Example: In Thailand, tourism generates $66.8 billion in revenue and supports 2.7 million jobs. This is more than the revenue generated by the agriculture, manufacturing, and construction industries combined.
      • Main idea 2: Tourism can help to promote cultural exchange between different countries. 
        • Supporting idea: This is because tourists get to experience the cultures of the countries they visit, and they also share their own cultures with the people they meet.
        • Example: 
          • The Chinese government has been promoting tourism as a way to promote cultural exchange with other countries. The government has invested in developing tourism infrastructure and promoting Chinese culture to tourists from around the world.
          • Vietnam is a popular tourist destination for people from all over the world. This has helped to promote understanding and appreciation of Vietnamese culture around the world.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Tourism can also lead to cultural erosion. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • This is because tourists may bring their own cultures with them and impose them on the cultures of the countries they visit. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "impose" tiếng anh
          • This can lead to the loss of traditional cultures and practices.
        • Example: For example, in some parts of Southeast Asia, traditional cultures have been eroded by the influx of tourists who prefer to stay in Western-style hotels and eat Western-style food.
      • Main idea 2: Tourism can also lead to traffic congestion. 
        • Supporting idea: This is because tourists often drive to tourist destinations, which can put a strain on the infrastructure of the countries they visit.
        • Example: 
          • In Venice, Italy, the influx of tourists has led to traffic congestion and air pollution. The city's narrow streets are not designed to handle the large number of cars that tourists drive into the city each day. This has led to traffic jams, pollution, and noise pollution.
          • In Bali, Indonesia, the influx of tourists has led to the flooding of villages and the destruction of rice fields. The large number of cars that tourists drive on the island has caused the ground to compact, which has made it more difficult for water to drain. This has led to flooding in some villages and the destruction of rice fields.

Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0

>> IELTS Intensive Writing - Sửa bài chi tiết

>> IELTS Intensive Listening

>> IELTS Intensive Reading

>> IELTS Cấp tốc

>> Thành tích học sinh IELTS TUTOR với hàng ngàn feedback được cập nhật hàng ngày