Bên cạnh hướng dẫn em kĩ thêm cách phân tích đề thi thật IELTS GENERAL TRAINING dạng Complaint letter, bài này là đề thi thật 04/8/2020, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn thêm Giải đề"Companies should provide sport and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 12/11/2023)
I. Đề bài
Companies should provide sport and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể phân bố 2 đoạn thân bài như sau:
- Main idea 1: If the companies organize different sports and social events in communities, it will give these people a scope to engage themselves in fun activities.
- Supporting idea: These facilities will improve the lives of locals and so improve the image of the company in the community
- Example: At Google's campus in Mountain View, California, the company's organization of diverse sports and social events, such as the annual Google Soccer Tournament and community fitness classes, not only offers enjoyable activities but also cultivates a sense of community well-being, contributing to an improved quality of life for residents and enhancing Google's image as a socially responsible and community-oriented company.
- Main idea 2: They will be able to reach out to more people and uphold their goods.
- Supporting idea: In some countries, companies sponsor public areas such as beaches or parks, and so they are allowed to advertise in these spaces.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
- For example, when a sports company organizes a football match where it uses its own products, the players and youngsters will be able to use these and later go on to buy them for personal use.
- Main idea 1: If the companies organize different sports and social events in communities, it will give these people a scope to engage themselves in fun activities.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Nowadays, companies are exploring various strategies to promote their brand and products, with one compelling measure being the provision of facilities for local communities. I totally agree with this practice because it not only benefits the residents but also serves the interests of the companies themselves.
Firstly, organizing sports and social events allows community members to engage in enjoyable activities, thereby improving their quality of life. For example, at Google's campus in Mountain View, California, the company hosts diverse sports and social events like the annual Google Soccer Tournament and community fitness classes. These events not only provide fun and engaging activities but also foster a sense of community well-being. As a result, the residents' lives are enhanced, and Google's image as a socially responsible and community-oriented company is strengthened.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
Secondly, providing such facilities helps companies reach a broader audience and promote their products. In many countries, companies sponsor public areas such as beaches or parks and, in return, are allowed to advertise in these spaces. For instance, when a sports company organizes a football match and uses its own products, the participants and spectators get to experience these products firsthand. This exposure often leads to increased brand recognition and sales, as players and onlookers are more likely to purchase the products they have tried and enjoyed during the events.
In conclusion, companies should indeed provide sports and social facilities for local communities, as it enhances residents' quality of life and offers significant promotional opportunities for the companies.
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- Nhìn chung task response bạn thí sinh viết đúng, viết "not to mention that the productive and profit are able to boosted significantly" được vì main idea thí sinh bảo gũi với đc local community thì cũng có bao hàm ý đó gần gũi nên người ta mua hàng cho cũng có lí mà nói chung là không tới nỗi lạc đề
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