Phân tích"Some people think that children should obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others believe that children controlled very much are not well-prepared for their adult lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that children should obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others believe that children controlled very much are not well-prepared for their adult lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that children should obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others believe that children controlled very much are not well-prepared for their adult lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views & give your opinion
• Intro câu 2 & conclusion ủng hộ quan điểm số 2 
• Body 1: View 1
  • Main idea 1: Children should learn to respect authority.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • This is how children can understand their proper role in life. 
      • Everybody has some kinds of authorities, and teaching youngsters to submit to those authorities from the tender age will be conducive in the whole span of their lives >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "conducive" tiếng anh 
    • Example: 
  • Main idea 2:  There are many rules that parents want children to obey only because they are good rules, and children have little idea about negative consequences of disobeying them.
    • Supporting idea: 
    • Example: 
• Body 2: View 2 (ủng hộ quan điểm này)
  • Main idea 1: Children should learn for themselves what is wrong and right, and they need to demonstrate their personalities >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "Need" tiếng anh 
    • Supporting idea: If children do not know how to deal with problems for themselves, they will not able to solve a unique problem >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG CÂU ĐIỀU KIỆN
    • Example: 
  • Main idea 2: Many parents ruin their children’s life by being overprotective.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • They lack many important characteristics in their adult life and psychologists often attribute criminal activities due to abusing parents and teachers in childhood >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "CHILDHOOD" ELTS
      • If some sorts of freedom are not given to the children, they often cannot expose their true potential in life.
    • Example: 

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