Phân tích"Some children nowadays take sports seriously while others play sports in their free time. Is this a positive or negative development ?"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 17/5/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some children nowadays take sports seriously while others play sports in their free time. Is this a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 17/5/2023)

Some children nowadays take sports seriously while others play sports in their free time. Is this a positive or negative development?

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng positive):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea: Engaging in sports activities, whether pursued seriously or during leisure time, promotes physical fitness and overall well-being. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Regular physical exercise through sports helps children maintain a healthy weight, build strong muscles and bones, and develop cardiovascular endurance. 
      • Participation in sports activities contributes to mental well-being by reducing stress, improving mood, and promoting better sleep patterns. 
    • Example: Regular participation in sports activities has been found to reduce stress, improve mood, and promote better sleep patterns, as evidenced by a study among young students who reported lower levels of anxiety and experienced increased relaxation, enhanced emotional well-being, and improved sleep quality. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "quality" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea: Both serious and leisure sports participation offer opportunities for skill development in various areas.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Dedicated athletes often receive formal training and coaching, which allows them to develop specific skills relevant to their chosen sport such as technical abilities, strategic thinking, teamwork, discipline, and perseverance. 
      • Children who engage in sports during their free time may also develop valuable skills such as coordination, agility, decision-making, and adaptability. 
      • These skills are transferable and can benefit them in other aspects of life, including academics and social interactions. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ "benefit" tiếng anh
    • Example: For example, a student who actively participates in team sports learns important skills such as teamwork, communication, and leadership, which can be transferred to their academic pursuits, where they excel in group projects by effectively collaborating with peers and taking on leadership roles, as well as in social interactions, where they demonstrate strong interpersonal skills and the ability to work well with others.

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