Phân tích "Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Allowing children some freedom can foster independence and autonomy, helping them learn to make decisions and take responsibility for their actions.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: Freedom enables children to navigate and explore the world around them independently, promoting personal growth and self-discovery.
      • Example: Allowing children some freedom, like my niece - Sarah walking to school independently, can foster independence and responsibility, as they learn through their experiences and choices.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Reducing overly strict rules and regulations can lead to lower stress levels for children, as they may feel less pressure to conform to rigid expectations.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: A less restrictive environment can promote emotional well-being by reducing anxiety and the fear of punishment, allowing children to experience a more relaxed and joyful childhood.
      • Example: A family with strict rules and regulations decides to reduce them, leading to a more relaxed and joyful home environment. Initially met with resistance, the children eventually embrace the newfound freedom, resulting in reduced stress, anxiety, and a healthier expression of their individuality.

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