Cách viết conclusion (kết luận) dạng Discussion essay IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:

• Đề bài: In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Phần mở bài: viết 1 câu về chủ đề và 1 câu trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài: It is true that video surveillance has become commonplace in many cities in recent years. While I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of privacy, I believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
• Phần kết bài: sẽ paraphrase  câu  2 intro:  In conclusion, I would argue that the benefits of applying video security system in public areas is absolutely outweighed the disadvantages.

Ở kết luận này, ta có thể thấy được kết bài này có đầy đủ yêu cầu mà phía trên IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn:

• Bắt đầu đoạn bằng “In conclusion”.
• Tóm gọn ý chính của bài viết
• I argue = I believe
• Video security system = video surveillance
• Advantages….. outweigh the disadvantages = more benefits than drawbacks

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ 1:

• Mở bài:
  • It is argued by some that all students entering university should solely study subjects that will be of use for their future. In my opinion, however, it would be more beneficial for them to choose the courses that they have an interest in.
• Kết bài:
  • In conclusion, although some people think that universities should only offer the most useful subjects, I personally believe that students should have the right to study whatever they prefer.
• IELTS TUTOR chú thích các từ đồng nghĩa:
  • It is argued by some that → some people think that
  • solely → only
  • subjects that will be of use for their future → useful subjects,
  • In my opinion → I personally believe that
  • it would be more beneficial for them to → students should have the right to
  • choose the courses that they have an interest in → study whatever they prefer.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ 2:

• Mở bài:
  • It is argued by some that students would benefit more when they attend single-sex schools. In my opinion, however, it would be better for them to enter mixed-gender education.
• Kết bài:
  • In conclusion, although some people think that it is more beneficial to send students to single- sex schools, I personally believe that mixed-gender education brings more benefits for students.
• IELTS TUTOR chú thích các từ đồng nghĩa:
  • It is argued by some that → some people think that
  • students would benefit more → it is more beneficial to send students to
  • In my opinion → I personally believe that
  • it would be better for them to → brings more benefits for students.

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ 3:

• Mở bài
  • Working longer hours is getting more common in today’s society. I personally believe that this trend not only has a severe impact on the workers themselves, but also on their families and the community as a whole. Therefore, I totally agree with the idea of limiting working hours.
• Kết bài
  • In conclusion, I would argue that working time should be reduced since the frequency of long working hours exerts an adverse effect on employees, their family bonds and their community.
• IELTS TUTOR chú thích các từ đồng nghĩa:​
  • Working longer hours → the frequency of long working hours
  • I personally believe that → I would argue that
  • has a severe impact on → exerts an adverse effect on
  • workers → employees
  • limiting working hours → working time should be reduced

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