Phân tích"Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm “Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters”
    • Main idea 1: it eases the traffic congestion during peak hours >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng & Ideas topic "Congestion" IELTS
      • Supporting idea:
        • Parks, gardens and other historical buildings are locations where vertical buildings can be erected, which can shelter a sizeable proportion of people. 
        • When this can be given as accommodation slots for those who travel to work, they could save both time as well as money. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THOSE đứng trước WHO tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Employers can also find employees who can work over-time if this happens.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm “others disagree”& nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: This will make the city center more crowded and suffocated. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When gardens and parks, the only available spaces for the city-dwellers to breathe fresh air disappear, they would be more suffocated, and this might have serious consequences on their mental and physical health.
        • a locality with just bricks and walls everywhere, but no lush greenery around, renders it lifeless and apathetic. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "around" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Parks have a direct impact on the health of the inhabitants 
      • Supporting idea:
        • These are not only the places covered with turf and trees but also the places to improve their lungs for many people, better places to walk and perform yoga for others, playgrounds for children, better places for artists to work and finally preferred places to spend leisure time. 
      • Example: 

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